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Prompt Haiku - General - rhyming haiku couplet

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Cold pavements; short days,
Winter solstice – we hold hands,
Longest night is warm.

Warm asphalt; short nights,
Summer solstice – we're still friends,
Longest day is calm.
Rhymes are far from my comfort zone, here I wanted to use some traditional Bulgarian lyric's writing with the haiku form. I think it came out better than expected. Thoughts?

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General - rhyming haiku couplet
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ailerozn's avatar
I like how you combined haikus that rhyme into couplets. Very unique.