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Nope, not at all 
Its singularity of thought in the last line is perfect! It ties everything together on what the person is missing in the beginning lines, which offers great impact for the reader. 
Its singularity of thought in the last line is perfect! It ties everything together on what the person is missing in the beginning lines, which offers great impact for the reader. 