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I loved a girl – she smelled like August melancholy,
sweeter still,
she carried the scent of festival emotions,
tempered by the midnight flames
and fireflies' glow.

I loved a girl – her hair, the gentle hue of embers,
reflected dancing candlelight,
while in her eyes, as brown as mahogany,
I discovered tiny galaxies,
but most importantly – I saw my smile.

I loved a girl – I sensed her heartbeat,
playing to the rhythm of my breath.
Her every word,
imprinted tender cherry blossoms,
onto my soul.

I loved a girl – her lips tasted like morning air
cool against my heavy forehead,
her skin, softer than satin threads,
played games with the waning moonbeams -
its gravity, I could not resist, like the Sun,
cannot escape the zenith, on Summer solstice.

I loved a girl – she made me happy,
and sadly - I love her still.
I am really proud with myself with this one, hope you like it too.
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SenGoesRawr Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014
I don't know why it is, but when I get heartbroken, I purposely look for poems that tells about heartbreak/one sided love and other topics, that are going to make me even more sad.
But I love it.
And I also hate it.

And I also love this poem.
I kinda knew how this poem was going to end, cause it was just like reading my thoughts on a paper, written by someone else, and damn is it written well!

Thank you.
Though it feels a bit strange to say it when I got even more sad after reading this.
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IvanRadev Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! I hope it hasn't made you that sad though...
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SenGoesRawr Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014
Nothing I can't get over! to fall again, heh.
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Wonderful imagery in this, and then the bittersweet ending that I wasn't expecting. Really well done.
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IvanRadev Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I am happy this one had an impact, it is my favorite amongst my own pieces :)
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hopeburnsblue Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
 This is beautiful. I can really relate.
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IvanRadev Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I am glad to hear :) Thanks!
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Rashavarak Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014
Wonderful imagery and feeling.
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IvanRadev Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :)
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razureoblivion Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014
this is lovely
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